I was a student at May Road School in Auckland and this is a record of my learning.
Friday, 8 November 2019
Hello There, Ian here. Today we had a fundraiser about sushi. We needed money for the year sixs to go on a trip at the end of the term. Hope you like it.
Good job on this blog post. But when you say they had no money you sound like your saying that there poor. So say "because they did not bring any money" and do 2 spaces after a full stop. Good job for that. :] :) :D
Good job on this blog post. But when you say they had no money you sound like your saying that there poor. So say "because they did not bring any money" and do 2 spaces after a full stop. Good job for that. :] :) :D
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